Beginning

• Introduce Ma Mary and Henri in their own screen with text.  Half the screen will be text and other half will be a muted video of them

• Brief history of Liberian Civil War/Conflict (a few slides)

* Lower music volume in beginning

*Cut When she is talking about going back to Liberia

Main Idea/Titles (On screen text of a brief description that will lead into each main idea)

• Children- Rape

• Hunger - Starvation

• Jail - Beatings

*Add music during slides

* Edit more so that Ma Mary is beginning her discussion then fade her voice out and bring in Henri’s but keeping the focus on Ma Mary’s expressions

Endings

• Clips of Ma Mary speaking about her life before the conflict

• Was a businesswoman  

• Wants to do something now but isn’t capable

• How higher ground is helping